Tuesday 20 October 2020

Creative Writing

 

Planning: 
Bedroom / House 
Boy 
Devices 
Horror 

 The Horror SCREEN! 

In the year 2025, robots , devices , flying cars , and much more were popular. There once was a boy living in Japan named Toyoshi. He loves video games,there's one time he stayed on front of a screen for 24/7 straight when his parents were wondering why they couldn't stop their son. What they didn’t know was their son was cursed by the man who is feared by all gamers his name was Doril. Doril wanted to take their eyes and their souls. 

 Parents believe it's just a myth, lots of kids disappear every minute and every day,what they leave is a sign of an X. The Japanese government tried to stop kids from staring at any screen but...they were too late. Doril got millions of eyes and souls which can take over the world.only Toyoshi managed to escape from Doril. 

 Earth was being attacked by some mythical creatures that looked like aliens but with screen heads but it was too late. Humans were suffering from hot gas , only some people survived it including Toyoshi. They manage to escape using a spaceship. Every night they imagine their mistake. THE END Fraise & Viena

2 comments:

  1. Hi Fraise and Viena
    This is Ila and Faafua We really enjoyed reading your creative writing it had intresting stuff and intresting words. When We was reading we never found a mistake nice proof reading. Good JOb

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