Hi Fraise it is Harriet here. I am a year 8. Your blog post was really cool and it can make people think about things. One thing you could work on is when it introduces you don't have clouds covering it.Your blog post was great. Keep it up!
Hi Fraise, When i was reading your work i answered the question that you ask if you wanna be a hero you got to be brave,kind and many other stuff. keep up the good work. :)
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ReplyDeleteHi Fraise it is Harriet here. I am a year 8. Your blog post was really cool and it can make people think about things. One thing you could work on is when it introduces you don't have clouds covering it.Your blog post was great. Keep it up!
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ReplyDeleteWhen i was reading your work i answered the question that you ask if you wanna be a hero you got to be brave,kind and many other stuff. keep up the good work. :)
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